As you guys can see I've made some small changes to the first chapter:

1) I stopped using the 2nd person to make "general truths", since it sounded weird.
2) Vinyl's THOUGHTS are now written in italic (thanks to Flufux for the tip). It will be easier for you guys to understand who's talking/thinking, and I won't have to write "Vinyl thought" anymore....
Yeah I could've thought of this earlier but I just didn't.

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Okay, nightwalker finished his edits and the chapters looks nice enough. Here goes nothing. *hits the publish button and goes to sleep* What could possibly happen? *falls sleep*

Oh sh*t, it's late! I'll check it after university. Hopefully comments will not accumulate in an absurd number.

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